The Missing Chapter

In the original manuscript of The Wild Parrots of Telegraph Hill there was a chapter on the history of the unique little world of gardens and cottages where I was living (and live now) and the people who’d made it possible. (Judy and I own their house.) When I submitted the manuscript, my editor suggested that I delete it, and, being a first-time author, I didn’t argue. She even encouraged me to defend its inclusion. But I didn’t. A few days ago I decided to post it on my website. Here’s the link for anyone interested in reading it. It goes between the chapters “Dogen” and “Everything Changes.”

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8 Responses to “The Missing Chapter”

  1. kathy Says:

    What an incredible treat to read a lost chapter!!! It contains so much evocative history…truly inspiring about how people lived their lives within a bohemian ethic in the 30′s, 40′s, 50′s. Thank you!!!

  2. linda Says:

    After reading that and watching “The parrots of Telegraph hill” I have to find the book. I hadn’t seen “Parrots” until 4 months ago. I haven’t been to a book store really in all that time. Used book stores, yes, but not the only remaining new book stores. That was a lovely chapter and the editor was wrong, it should not have been left out, it was a tidbit of history that was more important than she thought. I loved the area where the film takes place, my husband and I have always wanted to live somewhere near San Fransisco and that area was beautiful. I’ve always envied the bohemian lifestyle.

  3. Margaret Benbow Says:

    It’s a fascinating footnote. I thought it would have made a great Appendix.

  4. Karen Says:

    I love that chapter, especially the part about the parties. I grew up in Mill Valley in the 1950′s going to parties like those — really interesting people and great fun, even for a kid!

    Why leave this chapter out? Was it the reference to the IWW? I suppose some editors get nervous at any mention of the Wobblies.

  5. Liz Says:

    Thank you for publishing that chapter Mark. Although I’ve now left the Filbert Steps and am back in England it is still a treat to read more of the fascinating history of the area.

  6. Linda Says:

    I think a creative re-write may be in order.

    “[Picasso's] left arm is draped around [Sophie], who, lithe and small, leans against him, her back against his ribs. Her head is turned to one side, and she’s looking up at [the big lug] with an open-mouthed, admiring smile.”

    I could swear I’ve seen those two lovebirds in that exact pose but I can’t, for the life of me, remember where…

    All silliness aside, thank you sharing this!
    :) Linda (no relation to the preceding poster)

  7. Sandra Mistretti Says:

    thank you Mark for posting this chapter. It is a remarkable love story, just as your book is, and I really enjoyed reading it. As a native San Franciscan, I’ve always enamored of any history of my city. This must be published too. I am going to read this to my 84 yr old mother, also a native, who will no doubt enjoy it as well.
    Glad to see you are still posting about the parrots and the city. Best regards,
    Sandra

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