Archive for September, 2012

Progress Report #84

September 24, 2012

In July, when I began my hiatus from Street Song, I imagined myself working on this here blog a lot more. Instead, the actual effect of taking the break was full retreat—in all areas! Today I finally started work on the last draft. My first task is to begin creating an outline for a potential publisher. My intention is to go part way down that road and then begin writing the draft, continuing work on the outline in the evenings. (I’m a morning writer.) I’m working by hand as much as possible now, going to the computer only when I need to edit. As I’ve said, I won’t be writing about my work on this draft very much—an occasional post to say how things are going. I hope to get back to this blog more now. Sometimes I feel as though life in this world has gotten so weird that I don’t know where to begin. And I don’t want just to complain. But it has gotten very difficult to see the way to a better place.

Progress Report #83

September 14, 2012

I’m still on my break from Street Song. Besides allowing me some much needed rest, the long hiatus has allowed for the broader perspective to reemerge from underneath the flattening mass of details. I had imagined that I’d be posting here more often, but I haven’t felt like writing. I’ve mostly been reading (books! real books!) and helping Judy with her work-in-progress, Pelican Dreams. I’ve been transcribing interviews for her and trying to figure out how to contact the various copyright holders whose photographic stills she’s using. I have not been looking at her edits, so it was a pleasure to see finally what she’s been doing. A couple of nights ago Judy showed a rough cut of the film as a benefit for the Green Film Festival here in San Francisco. I figured it would be exactly that, rough, and probably a bit slow in spots. But from beginning to end I was awake and I was often moved. More than once I felt a twinge of jealousy or envy. I want my book to be that good. While I certainly won’t be regarded as an objective observer, it appeared that the audience of around sixty souls felt much the same as I did. She still has a ways to go. I’d say the film is around 75% complete.

It looks like I’ll be resuming work on Street Song during the last week of September. And then it’s going to be one disciplined romp through to the end. Once I’ve started I won’t be making a lot of these progress reports. The work on the last draft is going to be exacting and, as I’ve said before, it would make me feel too self-conscious, as though I were writing the book in a department store showroom. I’m looking forward to getting back to work. I feel good about what’s to come.